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Gabkicks Junior Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 13 |
I don't want your pity Just give me death Kill whats within me Take away my breath The disease hit me after just one of her stares The pain ripped through me and no one cared There was no blood, only tears onseen and screams unheard from words not said. There was no love, no sweet soft lips, no tender hand against my head. Only pain I ask you to take away Before my thoughts and actions lead me astray... from you |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
i'll have to say, this is one of the best i have seen in pip in a long time. this was an amazing poem...i loved the whole concept...great poem! riley * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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Gabkicks Junior Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 13 |
Thanks for reading it. I'm sorry about the spelling errors. I wrote it late at night and i'm going a little crazy |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
crazy is fun  * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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Gabkicks Junior Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 13 |
sorry... not this kinda crazy |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
hey, if you need to talk e-mail me, i am always [email protected] recently gone thru rough times and maybe able to help! riley * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
*hatred is with you* good write. |
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