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Teen Poetry #6

Why Did it Go Away

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2003-07-30 04:22 PM

I have no idea what went wrong
Why this happened just now
Incented barrel powder stench
Truly an accident some how

Give an extra little effort
Sad and lost it went away
Was it good for a smirk
I dont know, it didnt stay

Lots of thought, plan it out
Memorize just doesnt do
Now its gone and forever lost
So heres another just for you

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My last poem got lost because I forgot to put the title on it and the back button didnt work.

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Lexy
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since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-07-30 10:01 PM

I love the begining.
great job.
You inspire me.
~Lex

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2003-07-30 10:44 PM

thanx

Jaime

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3 posted 2003-07-31 12:07 PM

Nice flow. And I find it rather humorous that you wrote about losing a poem. (a smirk for me).

And I love Jimi, by the way. Nice to see someone experienced.

jaime.

the faeries creep into my hair at night leaving it in terrible knots

[This message has been edited by Jaime (07-31-2003 12:08 AM).]

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2003-07-31 12:49 PM

Yeah the one I lost was about why I write so when it didnt come back I figured the only way to properly handle the situation would be to write about that too.

And yes the Experience is still as loud was it was in the sixties, Jimi, I dont even want to imagine music without his influence.
Truly an awesome man.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

5 posted 2003-07-31 02:36 PM

nice write.

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