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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Absense words and proper grammer Dark sounds in prison slammer Guilty thoughts we procreate Set a blaze and decorate Sharp response and trial charge Withered man address the searge Fun and games and limit set No parole is what you get Never had a wisdom tooth And broke the lines of hidden truth Set a victim on the flame Let him roll and feel his shame Lost within a power trip Set apart the truth might slip Electric shock inside the cage Return the favor carnal rage a trickle of music from a well |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Woah...never have I read a rhyming poem---THIS well plotted out. I liked it. The rhyming scheme wasn't the LEAST bit predictable. Kudos. The world is good, and nothing bad ever happens! |
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kj Junior Member
since 2003-07-28
Posts 15Australia |
this is awesome absolutly awesome |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx. It feels nice to have gotten this out |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
makaveli..... |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
Well, you surprise me every time I read your words..amazing stuff. I'm so jealous. But also in awe.. great piece. ~Lex  |
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Song_for_Serenity Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 97USA |
This was great! I don't think I've read any of your poems before, but if this is an example of your regular work, I believe I'll become a devoted reader. Keep up the great work! Have a spiffy day!  ~Angela |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx everybody. Im glad you enjoy my poetry. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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