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jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

0 posted 2003-05-05 06:09 PM

" So Perfect"
By: Janna Shaffer

And as the light hits your face,
Your beautiful eyes seem to just glow,
With your arm around me you squeeze me tight,
I hope you never let go,
It’s so perfect.
I lay my head on your chest,
And I can hear your heart beat,
On a cold night your here,
To warm my cold hands and feet,
It’s so perfect.
And I am just so happy,
Knowing that you’re there,
Looking in my eyes, saying, “ I love you”
While running your fingers through my hair,
It’s so perfect.

FlyingCloud
Member

since 2003-04-28

Posts 151
A little place inside my head

1 posted 2003-05-05 06:11 PM

I'm not really sure how to put it, as my heart has been broken, but good work...

+Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+
T. S. Eliot (1888 - 1965)

brezee
Member

since 2003-06-02

Posts 140

2 posted 2003-07-29 12:30 PM

wow...nice job, this poem is pretty much perfect if ya aks me lates ~*~*brezee*~*~

kj
Junior Member

since 2003-07-28

Posts 15
Australia

3 posted 2003-07-29 04:01 AM

this is so sweet man i miss feeling that way

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

4 posted 2003-07-29 12:35 PM

good onnneeeeeeeee.

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

5 posted 2003-07-29 12:47 PM

wow, this was amazing...it brought a smile to my face and a wonderful thought to my mind......thank you...

loved it...

riley

*the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time*

jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

6 posted 2003-07-29 02:45 PM

thanks guys!

Song_for_Serenity
Member

since 2003-05-28

Posts 97
USA

7 posted 2003-07-29 10:42 PM

Great poem. It's one of those that brings a warm fuzzy feeling to the reader. Anyhoo, thank you for sharing. Have a spiffy day!

~Angela
"Anything less than mad, passionate love is wasting your time...Life has too many mediocre things in it, love shouldn't be one of them..."

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

8 posted 2003-07-29 11:24 PM

This brings back missed memories for me! I could picture what once was in my little mind. Thanks for the read! I enojoyed it and it just about brought tears to my eyes when I was finished! ~Jess

"At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato

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