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Friday Night (a chorus of Novelty Hats)
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Friday Night (a chorus of Novelty Hats) |
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collarbone_girl Junior Member
since 2003-07-14
Posts 45Wonderland |
Were always crying Tears of hilarity We all look so perfect immersed in candlelight and contentment So classically teenage, drink, drugs and rock and roll But from the outside you cant see Philosophy Poetry Religion Love And comedy hats Big round eyes are dancing to the sounds of a guitar Passion fuelled lyrics, slurred and toxic, fill the air Its times like these I wonder Are we the only people in the world this mad? Or is everyone else like this behind closed doors? Who cares? Last night the stars truly went wild The princess The poet The giant The diva The comedian And the joke Fag ends, razorblades, candle wax and ice We never sleep when were together, its just a waste of time When we could be talking about nothing Its funny how being a weirdo, can make you so much more interesting I could listen to you sing, talk, laugh, play All night If you were a… What’s the worst thing you… What’s your biggest regret? Who knows this one? Aww, do you remember that? Right, a guy walks into a bar… Photograph moments, cross-dressing and blood Smoke and laughter rise to the ceiling If the sun never came up, I’m sure we could drink tea and talk evil dead for eternity Maybe one day we will. This Cool Night Air Is Curious... |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
wow, very real. good write. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
dark, wordly, real. I loved it. Your style is amazing..unique. ~Lex..  |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
like lexy said, unique! i loved it, such a change from the normal....library piece! riley *the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time* |
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jaysh Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 133IL, USA |
yes good write! "Its funny how being a weirdo, can make you so much more interesting" So true!! lol! |
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lingering thoughts Member
since 2003-05-03
Posts 70Illinois, USA |
Another good one one well related good job !CaSSandra* |
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rose Member
since 2003-08-02
Posts 53 |
"are we the only people in the world this mad?" no, you're not, i assure you....great write..i'm really impressed. unique and eloquently phrased. |
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rose Member
since 2003-08-02
Posts 53 |
p.s. i absolutely love the title: it is really creative! |
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