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Poe_Pot_Pie
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since 2003-06-01
Posts 107
Canada

0 posted 2003-07-27 10:48 PM


I gurgle. I gasp, I scream, I chuckle.
Like a tomato gasping for breath.
Like a tomato screaming loudly.
Like a tomato chuckling to himself.

Still, like a tomato gurgling under water.

All tomato must end up food or waste.
That is their existance.

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peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
1 posted 2003-07-27 11:18 PM


Tomato? Confusing...

No offense, I don't like this much...

"At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato

Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
2 posted 2003-07-27 11:55 PM


LOL.this is so funny...oh. That was great.
~Lex..
Welcome!

[This message has been edited by Lexy (07-27-2003 11:55 PM).]

kj
Junior Member
since 2003-07-28
Posts 15
Australia
3 posted 2003-07-28 02:32 AM


this is um interresting
why a tomato

dertah
Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

4 posted 2003-07-28 02:21 PM


ive never been this confused before......GREAT JOB.
lingering thoughts
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 70
Illinois, USA
5 posted 2003-07-28 10:41 PM


yeah .. im very confused hehe
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