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Poe_Pot_Pie Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 107Canada |
I gurgle. I gasp, I scream, I chuckle. Like a tomato gasping for breath. Like a tomato screaming loudly. Like a tomato chuckling to himself. Still, like a tomato gurgling under water. All tomato must end up food or waste. That is their existance. |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Tomato? Confusing... No offense, I don't like this much... "At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
LOL.this is so funny...oh. That was great. ~Lex..  Welcome! [This message has been edited by Lexy (07-27-2003 11:55 PM).] |
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kj Junior Member
since 2003-07-28
Posts 15Australia |
this is um interresting why a tomato |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
ive never been this confused before......GREAT JOB. |
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lingering thoughts Member
since 2003-05-03
Posts 70Illinois, USA |
yeah .. im very confused hehe |
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