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Teen Poetry #6

My Secret Place

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
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0 posted 2003-07-28 06:12 AM

This is the place
to be
when the world seems
too cold
and the job gets
too tedious
and the errands prove
too insulting
for words.

Soft skin and weary bones
crumple down upon
feather pillows-
and all I see are
loving eyes
as I sigh and realize
this is the place
to be.

*Someone pulled up my old poem and it was kind of from a fight I was having with my other half and I was being sarcastic, so I figured I'd write something new to replace it. Dedicated to the one I love, my best friend.

"Now I'm convinced that he's heaven sent, and must be out of his mind- mama he's crazy, crazy over me."

[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (07-28-2003 06:12 AM).]

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

1 posted 2003-07-28 02:23 PM

is this like a la la land? damn that jenifer. haha nice write.

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

2 posted 2003-07-28 06:02 PM

great write...i loved the mood. very good, in my library

*the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time*

anawnda
Member

since 2002-07-26

Posts 113

3 posted 2003-07-28 11:31 PM

ey im Baack!!!!=) i can totally relate to your poem(pardon for the cliche)

* you can hurt me...with your bare hands,or
you can hurt me using the sharp edge of what you said.....* jewel kilcher

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