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@nÅngelÖf£ife
New Member

since 2003-07-18

Posts 4
pennsylvania

0 posted 2003-07-26 09:33 PM

Skips a beat

i always thought
that love was for in the movies
never something that could really happen to me
but then i saw you......
and everything changed!

i look at you
and my heart skips a beat
i stumble when i speak...
and its hard for me to eat!

but.... i never knew wut love was
untill i met you
i never knew how it felt
but... now i do!

sumtimes....when i think of you
its hard for me to concentrate
on the things i was supposed to do
and i end up handing them in late!

like w/ my research paper
it was half way done
and i tried to finish it
but i had barely just begun!

and when im trying to answer a question
its like i had a complete brain freeze
and i cant think
everything else jsut passes me by

i think of you
and my heart skips a beat
i try to take my mind off you
but ur in my dreams constantly

i wanna tell you..
but im scared u dont feel the same way
so i wrote this poem
and im giving it to u today!

everytime i look in ur eyes
i see my future...w/ me and u
and i try to talk to u
but... i dont kno if u feel the same way 2!

so when u get this poem.....
please..dont laugh and throw it away
b-cuz i want to kno....
do u like me to?

ok.......im really hyper......and tired.....and bored......and this just poped into my head!!!!!
well tell me wut u think!!!1

Luv ya!11 :B mwah......

Kay

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

1 posted 2003-07-26 11:53 PM

this was good, lots of feeling, but the spelling of the words was a little off. like wut was slipped in, and some ur ( lol ) and you put w/ for with.....little odd to read, little hard on the brain late at night...

but the context was very nice....good read

good write

riley

*the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time*

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

2 posted 2003-07-27 02:43 AM

good oonnnnnneeeeeeeeee.

@nÅngelÖf£ife
New Member

since 2003-07-18

Posts 4
pennsylvania

3 posted 2003-07-27 03:47 PM

thank you for replying......yea......when i get tired....i just stop trying to spell correctly.....and let whatever my hands type at the time stand. well......thank you again for your guys compliments!!! i appreciate it!!!! ummmmmmmm..... if you get the chance...do you think you could read my poem called girl overlooked?? thank you again....and again!!! :Bmwah.....

kay

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