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Toasty Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 74my little hole in wisconsin |
why do I sit here and take the fall if you don't care, why should I call waste my time on empty hopes fairytale endings, and frog-prince dopes nothing is really as it seems life can't be filled with empty dreams so I'll just sit here like the rest so who cares if I'm doing my best as long as I look happy to be in my own little world, with noone but me to keep me company on a cold dark night something about me just "isn't right" or at least that's what I heard them say but I don't really care to play the happy princess with her princely dope just sitting here without hope and knowing that I'll never be what everyone expects of me so what's the use in having hope sitting here, grasping at ropes that won't get me where I wanna be when will I be accepted for me? "Nothing is so strong as gentleness; Nothing so gentle as real strength." -Francis de Sales. [This message has been edited by Toasty (07-22-2003 11:28 PM).] |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
excellent write. im there with you though. |
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Silent Evincar Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179Here There and Places Between |
Painful and promising. Show them all, make them accept you for what you are. Never lie down, never give...never surrender! Ohh this piece inspires me. Thank You, very well done. NJS |
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Song_for_Serenity Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 97USA |
Very nice. Don't ever let what anyone says get you down. Often times, they don't know half of what they're talking about. Great write. ~Angela |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
I hear you. This was very well expressed. I enjoyed this piece. ~Lex..  |
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