Teen Poetry #6 |
Future |
Savage Quiescence Member
since 2002-07-29
Posts 326Wandering |
Okay, this is the last installment to the set of three poems I wrote over a year ago. I thought it was time I finally post the last of 3. Future The smile, the touch, the single word from which it all began, A true love that was meant to be the stars had laid the plan. They fell in love, their passion grew until their souls were one, They left behind the tears of pain a new life had begun. In wedded bliss they made a home with love and great delight, They had raised two thriving children and lived with blessed might. Together they were old and gray but still their feelings grew, They loved eachother more and more As each day came anew. -Alicia Morris "Whatever life brings, I've been through everything, but now I'm on my knees again" -Creed |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wow this is beautifull written. If I love you enough will you feel it over the distance? |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
Hmmm, I'm not sure I've seen the others... This is great though and you have already convinced me the others are just as good. I enjoyed reading this, it was very cute. Laura "All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life." |
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Tabitha LeAnn Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 50Kansas, USA |
AMAZING POEM!!! I REALLY LIKED IT, IT WAS VERY GOOD, AND EASY TO UNDERSTAND. GREAT JOB!!! |
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Savage Quiescence Member
since 2002-07-29
Posts 326Wandering |
Thank you |
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Song_for_Serenity Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 97USA |
Beautiful poem. I liked how well it flowed and the warm fuzzy feeling it brought to me. ~Angela |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
ha ha dude, most excellent poem. haha |
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