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Savage Quiescence
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0 posted 2003-03-28 10:07 AM


Okay, this is the last installment to the set of three poems I wrote over a year ago. I thought it was time I finally post the last of 3.

Future

The smile, the touch, the single word
from which it all began,
A true love that was meant to be
the stars had laid the plan.

They fell in love, their passion grew
until their souls were one,
They left behind the tears of pain
a new life had begun.

In wedded bliss they made a home
with love and great delight,
They had raised two thriving children
and lived with blessed might.

Together they were old and gray
but still their feelings grew,
They loved eachother more and more
As each day came anew.

-Alicia Morris

"Whatever life brings, I've been through everything, but now I'm on my knees again" -Creed

© Copyright 2003 Alicia Morris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-28 01:52 PM


Wow  this is beautifull written.

If I love you enough will you feel it over the distance?

NSnaomian
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since 2002-07-22
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2 posted 2003-03-28 02:42 PM


Hmmm, I'm not sure I've seen the others...
This is great though and you have already convinced me the others are just as good.
I enjoyed reading  this, it was very cute.
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

Tabitha LeAnn
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since 2003-03-27
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3 posted 2003-03-28 03:01 PM


AMAZING POEM!!! I REALLY LIKED IT, IT WAS VERY GOOD, AND EASY TO UNDERSTAND. GREAT JOB!!!  
Savage Quiescence
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Wandering
4 posted 2003-03-28 03:31 PM


Thank you
Song_for_Serenity
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since 2003-05-28
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5 posted 2003-07-28 12:26 PM


Beautiful poem. I liked how well it flowed and the warm fuzzy feeling it brought to me.

~Angela
"Anything less than mad, passionate love is wasting your time...Life has too many mediocre things in it, love shouldn't be one of them..."

dertah
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6 posted 2003-07-28 02:26 PM


ha ha dude, most excellent poem.  haha
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