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Teen Poetry #6

Change The Story

Petey
Junior Member

since 2002-12-16

Posts 27
Idaho, USA

0 posted 2003-07-22 09:14 PM

Change The Story

If I did not act then,
Even after how long it's been,
Can I do now what I should have before?
Am I even allowed to love you anymore?
No, I'm not, and I shouldn't even asked.
I believe my window of opportunity
Has already long past.
For anything I've done wrong, I'm sorry.
But could you please change this story?

I really wish I could turn back time.
To change this story.
To undo my insideous crime.
To do now what I had to do then.
I swear to never make this mistake again
If you just accept me now
And do not think of me as foul.
And for that I am sorry.
But could you please just change this story?

Run that past me one more time.
I missed the part that makes this all fine.
Run that past me one more time.
Tell me just what is the bottom line?
What am I supposed to do?
Am I even supposed to try?
Try to make things better?
Try to make things right?
If not, please tell my why.

-Petey

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

1 posted 2003-07-22 11:41 PM

*hatred drops his chin and shakes his head*
sometimes we screw up man, and theres nothing you can do about it. good write though.

[This message has been edited by dertah (07-22-2003 11:42 PM).]

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

2 posted 2003-07-23 12:46 PM

YES! YES! YES! The questions are beautiful. The last stanza drew me in harder than the whole piece. What more? What else? When? Where? How? Why? Very good. *Golfers clap*

NJS

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