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Lindsay
Member

since 2003-03-26

Posts 59
South Dakota

0 posted 2003-06-26 11:04 PM

I want to get over you
But I can’t
There is just something about you
Even though I know you’re bad for me
I still want you
I try to get you off my mind
But somehow you always find a way into my head
I know I should move on and forget about you
Only I don’t know how
There are so many reminders of what we had
The necklace you bought me, and stuffed bear, and the painted fan from Hawaii
Our song when it comes on the radio
Even my room is a reminder of us
Our first kiss happened there and so much more
Can we ever be what we were?
Or are we just simply through?

~*BayBee*~
Member

since 2003-04-09

Posts 65
In The Clouds...

1 posted 2003-07-20 02:54 AM

This was a great poem! It reminded me so much of whats going on in my love life today. Keep up the good work!

sixington
Member

since 2003-07-14

Posts 53
Utah

2 posted 2003-07-21 02:55 AM

i had a wierd reaction to this poem... while i was reading the whole first part i was thinking about drugs and cutting. and then i read the necklace part and it cleared it up. i liked how it did that for me, because it helped me see how hurt this was. It still seems a little unclear though. sorry bout the random-ness of this post.

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

3 posted 2003-07-21 09:19 PM

*sniffle, sniffle* and hatred leaves with nothing to say, too hurt by the words.

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

4 posted 2003-07-21 09:29 PM

wow do I feel this one! that's all I have to say..'cept you struck a chord in me in this piece only good writers can do that nice work
~Live and Laugh~

The problem with resisting temptation is you never know if you'll get the chance again
~Bella~

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

5 posted 2003-07-22 01:26 AM

So much emotion and thoughtfulness. I'm a little confused though why were they bad for you??

Lindsay
Member

since 2003-03-26

Posts 59
South Dakota

6 posted 2003-07-22 11:34 PM

the reminders themselves aren't bad. it's the guy himself.
Thanks for all your replys!

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