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Evie
Junior Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 15

0 posted 2003-07-20 07:35 PM

Enveloped in tears and lost in my fears.
These things that weigh me down,
Have never ceased in breaking me,
Having a death-grip on what is really me.
The pain I bear is evident for all to see,
And when I look in the mirror,
My reflection is fading with time
Taking over me.
The anger deep inside of me can never be erased.
It's the only thing that keeps me alive,
Besides God's never-failing grace.
I'll fight till I'm incredibly strong,
To protect myself from those that would do me wrong.
I'm independent and utterly alone,
This messed up world is not my home,
And these ghostly faces surrounding me,
Have never helped me grow to be what's truly me.
I've got to do this on my own.
I've got to fight till the end.
I shall never bend.
I will never become something I wasn't meant to be.
I've got to fight for what's really me,
Lest I be torn apart.
For what's more will never play a song,
In my crumbling heart.
I'm left to feel what's playing in my mind,
Like an ongoing reel.
I'm left to feel what's real.

[This message has been edited by Evie (07-21-2003 02:11 PM).]

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-07-20 08:09 PM

Hey Evie, or fanny

Its me! I'm so glad you got signed up here. Your poem was amazing. On of the best I've heard from you. I could really relate to what you were saying..you have a very natural flow. I love the last two lines.
~Alexis

[This message has been edited by Lexy (07-20-2003 08:09 PM).]

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

2 posted 2003-07-20 08:14 PM

I REALLY liked this poem! Great for a first post!

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

3 posted 2003-07-21 09:09 PM

ha ha, excellent write mate. and lynn...that is the most disgusting smiley face i've ever seen.

[This message has been edited by dertah (07-22-2003 02:50 PM).]

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

4 posted 2003-07-22 03:30 AM

Stop(!) and wiggle with it! Thats what I want to say. Reading feels like it has to be at a hundred miles a minute, too much too fast. For it to be that quick though it was pretty interesting, remember that. Just slow it down.

NJS

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