Hello. - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Adam Alexander
Junior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 11
Home...

0 posted 2003-07-19 04:10 PM

A sinister innocence,
a charasmatic tone.
Very analytical,
rarely ever prone.

Naive when appropriate.
Logical when its not.
Manipulative tendencies,
because it's all he's got.

Outspoken, like no one else.
Some describe him as 'the oddest'
A rather large vocabulary,
and so very modest...

Hello, my name is Adam Alexander.

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

1 posted 2003-07-19 05:08 PM

I know we don't talk much or at all anymore but I figured I would reply to your poem...

I like how you ended this, it was creative. Seems like you're good at describing yourself. Good write. ~Jess

"If I could give you one gift it would be my eyes...So you could see how it feels to be me looking at you." -Unknown

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

2 posted 2003-07-19 05:20 PM

This was good...and DEFINATELY you. Glad to see you're back...

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

3 posted 2003-07-19 05:21 PM

Welcome to pip, Adam.

What an intro, eh? A great write here. I love how you took a poem, a large vocabulary, and an interesting angle to describe yourself. Well done.

Enjoy pip! Feel free to wander about and ask questions, if you don't know how it works. Oh, and check your email for a greeting...

~Titus

The few. The proud. The Marines.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

4 posted 2003-07-19 06:55 PM

In the second stanza I thought maybe you were describing me.

Welcome to piptalk. I loved your poem, great idea for a first post. Bravo!
keep 'em commin'
~Lex..

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

5 posted 2003-07-20 06:16 AM

Hi there! -waves- I enjoyed this piece, thanks for posting, and welcome to PIP! Hope you enjoy your stay here.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

EleanorMoonbaby
Member

since 2002-09-02

Posts 202
England, UK

6 posted 2003-07-20 05:58 PM

Howdy-ho. Nice to see a newbie with an original poem. I liked it, especially the fact that you admitted to certain faults without apologising or turning it into an "I hate myself" rant. Well done dude.
Ellie

I'm not dead, OK? I'm just a little electroencephalographically challenged!

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

7 posted 2003-07-20 10:08 PM

Nice work- are you a returning member Mr. Vocabulary?

JC

"Now I'm convinced that he's heaven sent, and must be out of his mind- mama he's crazy, crazy over me."

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.