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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-07-17 12:05 PM

Unable to sleep
She walks through the night
Seing all the things
That hide in the day

Undefined destination
Hoping to find an answer
To a question she
Isn't even sure of yet

A lit cigarette in hand
She walks along a path
Usually taken by those
Who know where they're going

But she finds the night comforting...
So she walks on...

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-07-17 02:41 PM

Is this about me? I could relate to everything you said in this piece. You stated it very well. Loved it.
~Lex...

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

2 posted 2003-07-17 03:26 PM

It's a very good poem and I would almost think it's me except I don't smoke.

Sometimes you can't change what's going to happen but you can change how you percieve it.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

3 posted 2003-07-17 04:03 PM

same here.

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

4 posted 2003-07-17 10:24 PM

I really like this one...I've been there, too. Ha...really hit home. Nice job. Love's.

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

5 posted 2003-07-18 07:32 PM

I really liked this girlie. Good job!

Love ya!

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

6 posted 2003-07-19 02:48 PM

This is a wonderful peace, grinder. One of the best I've read from you. Perhaps it's because I relate, being a "NightCrawler" myself, or perhaps it's because I enjoy the style with which you wrote the poem itself. It has a nice length, good flow, nice feel. Splendid job, sg.

~Titus

I am williing the sacrifice myself to protect the United States of America, now and in the future.

[This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (07-19-2003 02:49 PM).]

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2003-07-20 01:33 AM

Staci~
Being a night owl, I really did enjoy this piece.
Nicely done.
~Vicky
"it is better to be a part of beauty
for one instant and then cease to
exist than to exist forever
and never be a part of beauty"
-- Don Marquis

EleanorMoonbaby
Member

since 2002-09-02

Posts 202
England, UK

8 posted 2003-07-20 06:22 PM

Dude, I thought this would be about X-Men! Ah well. Like the others replying, I can identify. Nice social observation.
Ellie

I'm not dead, OK? I'm just a little electroencephalographically challenged!

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

9 posted 2003-07-20 06:25 PM

sounds like me..great write

CraZi

Last night, i was looking at the stars, wondering where the hell did my ceiling go?!

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

10 posted 2003-07-20 07:10 PM

Thanks everyone, I'm glad you all enjoyed this.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

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