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babygurl55
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since 2003-05-28
Posts 18


0 posted 2003-07-16 09:34 PM



I hear you talk about her all the time,
And all I can think of is how you should be mine.
Now because of my decision we are apart,
Cause I was thinking with my head and not my heart.

My heart told me I loved you more than life its self,
My head was told me I needed someone else.
When looking back on my decision now,
I just think and ask myself how.

I can't take back what I've done,
All I can do is hope that I'm the one.
You tell me you love her and she loves you too,
But you've always know I can't live without you.

I don't care what they say,
I love even more from day to day.
So I want you to know now that we're apart,
I was thinking with my head and not with my heart.


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dertah
Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

1 posted 2003-07-17 12:59 PM


wow, my position in life right now.  almost enough to shoot myself.
CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 248

2 posted 2003-07-17 03:16 PM


i love it! exactly what i feel...most of the time!

Remember this advice: Hate is only reserved for those we truly love, and dont eat boogers!

Alnilam
Member
since 2003-07-04
Posts 75

3 posted 2003-07-17 06:47 PM


Can you believe I lost a fiance like that?!Hmm stupid I guess, but at least I know otehrs can sympathise. GReat poem though! Loved it

~*Alnilam*~
"The worst tragedy for a poet is to be admired through being misunderstood."

Magia_negra
Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 77
CA, USA
4 posted 2003-07-17 08:15 PM


Yeah...
I used to have this conflict between my brain and my heart.

...somos los locos para siempre
para siempre te amo
   mi vida...

Shlee
Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 72
USA
5 posted 2003-07-17 08:59 PM


Wow!!! This is a great poem.  You really captured the feeling and emotion in there.
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