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Teen Poetry #6

Where is your love?

frolicking dolphin
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since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

0 posted 2003-07-15 10:16 AM

I wish you were here
To comfort and protect me
To cure my sudden illness
To clear these thoughts from my mind

The times when I need you most
You're never somewhere near
You only seem to be nearby
When there are no dripping tears

Maybe I'm not open
Maybe you don't care
All I know is what I need
Your love to comfort my despair.

This is my first since comming off writers block, but I'm not too disappointed with it, tell me what you think

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

Alnilam
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since 2003-07-04

Posts 75

1 posted 2003-07-15 11:25 AM

I thought it was very well done. Good for coming off writer's block. Not to mention I could relate to it. Thanx for such a good read.

~*Alnilam*~
"The worst tragedy for a poet is to be admired through being misunderstood."

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