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Obsolete
Junior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 43

0 posted 2003-07-14 02:16 AM

Dearest friend
try no more
as last night
I could no longer wait
tempting as it was
I couldn't play those games
out it came
naturally I blushed
time passed by
slowly as it could
I feared the worst
this was the crossroads
and in that moment
I saw comfort
... as she smiled

[This message has been edited by Obsolete (07-14-2003 12:07 PM).]

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collarbone_girl
Junior Member

since 2003-07-14

Posts 45
Wonderland

1 posted 2003-07-14 09:16 AM

this was immense!

this cool noght air is curious...

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

2 posted 2003-07-14 09:26 AM

Great poem!

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

3 posted 2003-07-14 08:17 PM

very cute, and simple, I liked this.
thanks for sharin'
~Lex

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

4 posted 2003-07-15 10:42 AM

I liked that piece, nice work

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

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