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Teen Poetry #6

betrayal

Toasty
Member

since 2003-06-09

Posts 74
my little hole in wisconsin

0 posted 2003-07-14 10:41 PM

how could I be so blind
did I ever care
that you never had any feelings
that you never were truly there

you belittled and confused me
and yet I never dared
to question your so called “ loyalty”
and how your anger flared

at the tiniest hint of doubt
that your secret had got out
even though you lured me out
tricking me into telling what you didn’t wanna hear
although the truth was always clear

your motives and your actions true
to apparently what was the common view
that I was never “in”
that I was always “out”

and so you left me with my scars
and faded into black
and now my heart constricts

I just wish I could go back

"Nothing is so strong as gentleness; Nothing so gentle as real strength." -Francis de Sales.

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

1 posted 2003-07-14 10:46 PM

I really felt this. I was once in a relationship that was totally wrong for me and the other person, but neither of us really wanted to let go. It sucks, and I hope things get better in some way.

-Jen

"One's philosophy is not best expressed in words; it's expressed in the choices on makes." -Eleanor Roosevelt

[This message has been edited by BrokenDreams (07-14-2003 10:47 PM).]

Toasty
Member

since 2003-06-09

Posts 74
my little hole in wisconsin

2 posted 2003-07-15 06:07 PM

thanks for reading,
and well... understanding.

~toasty

"Nothing is so strong as gentleness; Nothing so gentle as real strength." -Francis de Sales.

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