Teen Poetry #6 |
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My Happy Place |
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Stinky Twinkie Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 204Dinwiddie |
For years I thought my happy place was inside a big pumpkin or under a see-saw or with the soap at the grocery store or inside the print of a blue tiger's paw but now I see where it is and its not in a pumpkin or in a big shoe I know exactly where it is today and its right beside you. -Stinky Twinkie has a happy place...but knock before you come visiting- |
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lingering thoughts Member
since 2003-05-03
Posts 70Illinois, USA |
awww i like it ... its cute ![]() ill be watching for more of yours CaSSandra |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
i would have to say awww also i liked this i really like how you show that you found comfort in fairy tails and for something i could say bad about you hummmmm your a little childish but arn't we all.keep writing when you live you begin to die |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Wow... Something almost serious from Sir Stinky Twinkie... Could it be?! ![]() - Cody - |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
I'm glad you have a happy place, and from the sound of it, someone to share it with you. ![]() -Jen |
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collarbone_girl Junior Member
since 2003-07-14
Posts 45Wonderland |
you suck bad, real bad. no, this was really good! i like the shortness (is that a word?) of it, it really puts across a happy mood. yay for yoU! this cool noght air is curious... |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
I really liked that one too, it goes from being a young child to a teen who understands more I think, nice work! ~*~Karen~*~ |
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