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Teen Poetry #6

Rockport

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2003-07-13 12:41 PM

The explosions of fireworks in the sky
and the bonfire heat on your cheek.
Rockport. Crowds. The fourth of July.
Crammed together. Too loud to speak.

People. Prizes. Festivities. Lights.
And the marching music playing for hours.
Orange moon softly pulling the tides.
There was no seclusion for lovers.

But once the darkness veiled the coast,
on the shore, with a towel beneath us,
we made love, with our ankles exposed,
undisturbed by the thirsty mosquitoes.

Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master

[This message has been edited by Master (07-13-2003 10:51 PM).]

snoduck
Member

since 2002-11-15

Posts 99
Selah, WA

1 posted 2003-07-13 04:55 PM

I like it. I honestly don't have a bad thing to say about it. Very well written, I really liked the style

-Erica-

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2003-07-26 11:13 PM

hmm..it makes me want to run and hide.
But I liked it none the less.
Lex

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

3 posted 2003-07-27 02:30 AM

oh yeah, nookie nookie nookie. whoohoo.

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