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BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

0 posted 2003-06-28 05:24 PM

This one is kinda long, but please bear with me. I'd really love to know what everyone thinks about this one.

***

You’re flying me higher
than anyone before.
You’re setting my soul free,
Letting me soar.

It hasn’t been very long,
since we got together,
Such a short time,
but it feels like forever.

I’ve told you so much,
you seem to understand.
I can feel the warmth,
as your holding my hand.

You accepted my past
without any questions.
I thought you were the same,
but maybe there are exceptions.

I’ve totally fallen,
for you, it seems.
But are you for real?
The man of my dreams?

I have no control
over what I feel.
I need to know now,
Is this nothing but a deal?

I know who you hang with,
I know your crew.
This kind of thing,
is something they would do.

Ask her out,
just for kicks.
Once you get her,
play some tricks.

I can hear them say it,
as they laugh with glee.
If that’s what’s real,
Why’d you have to pick me?

Maybe I’m wrong,
you really do care.
You mean what you say,
you’ll always be there.

Your kisses are so gentle,
Tender, and sweet.
I feel so much better,
every time we meet.

I want it to be true,
it feels so right.
I want to know,
are you missing me tonight?

Is it true love?
Or only a game?
Is it me that you want?
Am I the reason you came?

Here I am-
I give you my heart.
In the end,
Will you just tear it apart?

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2003-06-28 07:53 PM

Oooh, the questions which are only answered with time... I hate those ones. the thing I've learned over time though, is that you can't go through life not taking a risk on being hurt. Cause then you'll not have any fun at all. *hugs* hope it works out for you

It is said the Creator has taken a handful of South Wind and given each newborn Arabian the power of flight without wings

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

2 posted 2003-06-29 12:16 PM

This gave me that heart-clenching, confused, awful feeling of suspicion and hurt and blind, rejected love all over again. The reason I don't trust anyone.

Really good on rhyme and meter...

Be careful, girl... don't fall too deeply in love until you know the answers.

Hope everything goes okay.

-Lioness

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