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Teen Poetry #6

Wedged

Obsolete
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since 2003-06-27

Posts 43

0 posted 2003-06-27 10:50 PM

Wedged
between the organ and brain
this entangled river carries it
Slowly and methodically it flows
making sure,
it bumps every rock
on the way down
From time to time,
a fight against the current
The only hope I have,
is for it to wash away.

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2003-06-28 08:34 PM

Welcome to Passions!! I must say that this has me absolutely floored, I've read this over three times now, and each time it still wows me. I definitely look forward to reading more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (Please check your e-mail for a special greeting)

Rhonda - Moderator/Passions in Poetry

It is said the Creator has taken a handful of South Wind and given each newborn Arabian the power of flight without wings

Obsolete
Junior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 43

2 posted 2003-06-28 09:31 PM

I'm extremely grateful for your warm welcome Skyfire, thank you.

spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

3 posted 2003-06-29 12:06 PM

this is great..... but... whatever u want to go away will just stay until u deal with it....... belive me i know....... welcom and i loved the poem.

iamintroublebutnooneknowsitifyoucanfigureoutmymessagesthenhelpme.
at the end of the rope taking my last breath

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