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Teen Poetry #6

Something Simple

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2003-06-26 10:03 PM

dense inside
advantage point
force of breath
straight line
closure

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-06-26 11:23 PM

well now, this makes me think of all kinds of things......I love it when a poem makes me think

( it doesn't happen often...lol me thinking that is)

BabieDoll
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

2 posted 2003-06-27 11:11 AM

Short...but to the point...good job.

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

BrokenDreams
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since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

3 posted 2003-06-27 01:26 PM

Wow. A short poem that makes sense. I don't see that very often. Good job.

-Jen

I'd rather be hated for who I am than loved for who I am not. -Kurt Cobain

Jaime

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Posts 250

4 posted 2003-06-27 05:26 PM

I'd try to turn my thoughts over to something ready for shape, but I'm not melting into much.

Perhaps. Okay.

I just like how it feels.

the faeries creep into my hair at night leaving it in terrible knots

[This message has been edited by Jaime (06-27-2003 05:27 PM).]

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