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Teen Poetry #6

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xEmperorEmber
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since 2000-03-28

Posts 136
tx

0 posted 2003-06-26 07:39 PM

Salivate enough to
flush you down
i cant wash your
taste from my mouth
all the memories
the way you move
makes an impression on me that lingers
the things you did
the things you said
words that drive themselves like stingers
from the most poisonious insect
with the most beautiful wings
a venomous butterfly who
who enjoys to sing
about young boys
and their broken dreams
and spends her time
talking to trees
shes a beautiful thing
these are precious things

[This message has been edited by xEmperorEmber (06-27-2003 05:50 PM).]

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2003-06-26 07:46 PM

nice. Like a swift kick in the groin

keep writting

xEmperorEmber
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since 2000-03-28

Posts 136
tx

2 posted 2003-06-26 08:24 PM

thank you i think... lol

paul

Jaime

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Posts 250

3 posted 2003-06-27 05:33 PM

I like this, but I am not entirely sure as to why. It's not for technicalities, which I don't care much for anyway, but I suppose because you described something that I could not. I tried. But it didn't happen.

"i can't wash your taste from my mouth"

The kind of hopelessness... and vulnerability.. to time and space.. and knowing..

Oh, and did you mean "talking to trees"?

I don't know. But I told you, with you I am pretty. The same is here.

Love,

yours.

the faeries creep into my hair at night leaving it in terrible knots

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