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IndigoEve
Member

since 2003-01-10

Posts 279
Etched in the illusion of time

0 posted 2003-06-25 08:40 AM

Through my eyes, I can see disparity,
The broken yearnings of mysteries divine.
Hopeless souls-
Together we lived in a paradox.
Stories of mercy were twined into my dreams...
I am still weeping.
Tears of midnight ink fall across my ashen face.
Every word I ever spoke,
Destroyed;
And somehow I still live contented,
Counting the dandelions in sun-kissed fields.
Alone there,
I will make my calling,
Wading knee-deep in your poetic memory.
How poignantly bittersweet its stanzas taste,
Like the darkness,
Deliciously heavy with star-crossed wishes.
Not a finger can trace these sighs,
Bled from invisibility onto paper fine.
One breath,
Sweet one-
Your kiss was my ambrosia,
Condemning me to live in this immortal reverie,
Dyed with the black essence of purely fated time.

For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch,
And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss.--"Romeo and Juliet"

Song_for_Serenity
Member

since 2003-05-28

Posts 97
USA

1 posted 2003-06-25 03:07 PM

Hey there! This is my first time reading your poetry (I think). I am pleased with what I found. Your writing has a nice flow to it. Keep it up. Have a spiffy day!

~Angela
"Anything less than mad, passionate love is wasting your time...Life has too many mediocre things in it, love shouldn't be one of them..."

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

2 posted 2003-06-25 07:53 PM

Absolutly devine...wow there is just nothing more I can say than that...This piece was just simply masterful, soothingly beautiful and longingly sweet. There is not a single thing that I don't like or would change in the least..the whole thing is just...amazing
~Live and Laugh~

Don't look to me for perfection, for I will surely let you down.
~Bella~

rapturedmist
Junior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 30
USA

3 posted 2003-06-26 04:32 AM

Masterful...this piece shall go in my libary, if you don't mind of course.
-RM

IndigoEve
Member

since 2003-01-10

Posts 279
Etched in the illusion of time

4 posted 2003-06-27 11:55 AM

Wow, thanks so much everyone! And of course I dont mind, rapturedmist(lovely name, btw!) go right ahead.

For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch,
And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss.--"Romeo and Juliet"

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