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Teen Poetry #6

Long Fight-now over

WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

0 posted 2003-06-23 05:44 PM

I got just a little bored at work today while giving some girl her break...Sitting in the grain booth at the Long Island Game Farm is NOT my ideal of fun...But anyway, here is Long Fight-now over:
********************************

Since the beginning,
I've fought with myself.
But today- the battle
is over.

The long fight was
defeated this morning
when I woke from a
moonlit sleep.

Everything I always
wished for, is
true and there will be
no more fights.

Because the fight
that lasted a lifetime
is now over

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I not sure if I like this, but yeah. Peace

"Many a false step is made by standing still." -Chinese Fortune Cookie

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2003-06-23 07:24 PM

Yes, this is different from your other works.
But it's refreshing.
Im very glad to hear the inner battle is over,

I hope it stays that way.
ttyl,
Stephanie.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

[This message has been edited by WinterWren (06-23-2003 07:25 PM).]

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