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~*BayBee*~
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since 2003-04-09
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In The Clouds...

0 posted 2003-06-23 03:28 PM


I wonder if just one day you'll care...
I wonder if, for me,you'll actually be there...
I wonder if i'll ever get another chance to call you "mine"...
And i wonder if when you said "I Love You", if it was just a lie...
I wonder if i'll ever see you...
I wonder if you'll love me too....
But most of all, i wonder if you are wondering of these too...

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WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to
1 posted 2003-06-23 07:37 PM


Short poem, but very good.
I especially like the end.
Well done, thanks for the read.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

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