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chasing rain
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0 posted 2003-06-22 12:06 PM


VII.

Sam and I
We like to ride
Our wagon down the hill.
It's white and red
But momma said
It's more like honey dill.
So Sam and I
We laughed, then cried
'Cuz honey meant one thing:
That bees would chase
And try to race
To win so they could sting.

* * * * *
Ouch. My bum (am I allowed to say that word? Bum? )

-Leah

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1 posted 2003-06-25 04:57 PM


This is such wonderful writing and it has almost disappeared, do you people not know good poetry when you see it???

Great writing Leah I really enjoyed the read as usual your unique style shines through and provides us with a brilliant example of humourous poetry at it's best. Thanks for sharing

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2 posted 2003-06-26 01:24 AM


Leah, brilliant! You never cease to put a smile on my face. Keep it up, I shall be looking out for you *grin*

oh and yeah you can say bum here lol

It is said the Creator has taken a handful of South Wind and given each newborn Arabian the power of flight without wings

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