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peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
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Ocean Of Tears

0 posted 2003-06-20 05:00 PM


You see...
So many memories were left behind,
Good and bad,
Through it all we made it,
But now,
Nothing will be the same,
I've been driven over the edge,
To almost complete insanity,
Wonderous...
How someone can have such an impact,
Making decisions is impossible,
Not close enough to catch,
Just out of reach,
Is the knife,
I crave to win you over,
Maybe this will work,
Then we can finally be...
Us, together, forever.


*I wrote this in late May, there's a few spots that I need to fix but I just thought I'd post this one!*


"If I could give you one gift it would be my eyes...So you could see how it feels to be me looking at you." -Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Jessica Dodson - All Rights Reserved
Song_for_Serenity
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since 2003-05-28
Posts 97
USA
1 posted 2003-06-22 03:58 PM


Hey there! Great poem. Interesting style. Have a spiffy day!
~Angela
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