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Life Goes On
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Life Goes On |
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kadafi09 Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 143California, United States |
as i look through the empty halls, still thinkin' , in my car ring ring ring, quiet y'all, incomin call its about my ex girl from high school, happened to die she's was gonna be a mother without a father, nobody cry life with that playa, alcohol, domestic violence calls she used to do them back in tha days, do you recall while i raised tha g's with tha benz, iced out, blaze tha speed with tha sun roof, lets get smoked out, and blaze with me two in tha mornin and i drive by, escalade, iced out screamin, why did you die, until i passed out but i know that you're gone, i'm in tha zone thinkin i don't wanna die all alone but now you're gone and all i've got left is stinkin memories i would of loved you till death, i'm drinkin henessey i'm tryin to make it last, i wished death to tha playa when this passed yet life goes on |
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snoduck Member
since 2002-11-15
Posts 99Selah, WA |
I think you did a good job on this piece. It sounds kind of like a rap song but at the same time really hits a soft spot. I'm sorry for everything you've encountered, and all the pain you have to deal with, I hope things get better for you. Very good write! -Erica- |
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kadafi09 Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 143California, United States |
thanks for your opinion. my writing does help me to heal. |
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blueyedlioness Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289USA |
~.^ I wanna hear it when it becomes a hit single. Awesomeness.  -Lioness |
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kadafi09 Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 143California, United States |
So do i. |
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