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*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

0 posted 2003-06-25 01:17 AM

So I've decided for those few that care that I'm in less of a writers block and more in a lack of inspaeration phase, cause when I can think of something intellegent and worth while to write down it doesn't seem to come out half bad according to you guys but the problem that I'm having is finding something intellengent...heh...

Please just hold me,
and don't say a word.
The silence of your arms around me
is the best sound to be heard.

You don't have to flatter me
with a soft spoken phrase.
The touch of your hand
is better than flowers or praise.

When you look down and smile,
with that twinkle in your eye;
I know your love is genuine
and it gives me strength to get by.

I want to stay this way forever,
and feel the warmth of your touch.
Nothing could ever be better
than this soft, gentle hush.

Don't look to me for perfection, for I will surely let you down.
~Bella~

IndigoEve
Member

since 2003-01-10

Posts 279
Etched in the illusion of time

1 posted 2003-06-25 08:45 AM

I think I'll start my library with this very piece.

very soft, the way you describe everything. This is just beautiful.

For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch,
And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss.--"Romeo and Juliet"

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2003-06-25 01:21 PM

Very soft, soothing poem.
I enjoyed this one alot, it flowed perfectly and ended just right.
Beautifuly done.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

Song_for_Serenity
Member

since 2003-05-28

Posts 97
USA

3 posted 2003-06-25 03:03 PM

Beautiful, Bella! It's very sweet and very simple. It has a calm, relaxing aura to it. I like it. Have a spiffy day!
~Angela

"Anything less than mad, passionate love is wasting your time...Life has too many mediocre things in it, love shouldn't be one of them..." -From A Dre

rapturedmist
Junior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 30
USA

4 posted 2003-06-26 02:02 AM

Bah who needs intellegence? I mean we're ghetto fabulous by ourselves...so who needs the intellegence?
-RM
[PS I really like the 3rd stanza heh]

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

5 posted 2003-06-26 10:48 AM

Mmm...I love it! Another great poem...

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

6 posted 2003-06-26 01:01 PM

I really like this. I've been suffering from lack of inspiration also, so I wish you luck in finding something to write about.

-Jen

I'd rather be hated for who I am than loved for who I am not. -Kurt Cobain

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