Teen Poetry #6 |
The Watchers |
snoduck Member
since 2002-11-15
Posts 99Selah, WA |
I am not real Nor are the people That continually surround me My life is a dream A twisted nightmare I can't escape Time does not exist Just a mere passing Of day and night Fantasies That fill my head Confuse me No matter how hard I muster inside to try Failure always follows I'm being put to a test A test of strength and skills To see how much I can handle Which is never enough Everythings in my way I'm pulsating Too afraid to walk away Life is in my head An imaginative story Formed by the watchers. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I really like this one, it's emotional. It points out feelings that are hard to write about: "Time does not exist Just a mere passing Of day and night" What a line that expresses a lot more than it seems to - to the naked eye. |
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LegalSecret69 Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 69Virginia |
I agree...this was full of emotion. It was excellent. -Secret |
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