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Teen Poetry #6

On The Edge

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2003-07-11 08:01 PM

I sit on the edge
I feet hang over the side
I given up long ago
my cares have gone for a ride

I don’t care what happens
no second thought to jump
I’d like someone to push me
cuz’ my lifes hit the last slump

but I’ll just sit here
hell why not
I’ll be here again
again I’ll see this spot

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

1 posted 2003-07-13 03:56 PM

That's how I felt at one point. I was just sitting there, waiting for someone to come along and push me over the edge. Luckily, no one did. I managed to completely turn my life around, and I hope you can too.

-Jen

"One's philosophy is not best expressed in words; it's expressed in the choices on makes." -Eleanor Roosevelt

snoduck
Member

since 2002-11-15

Posts 99
Selah, WA

2 posted 2003-07-13 04:49 PM

I agree with brokendreams, I'm sure we've all been there at one point. I really like this, it wasn't too short, nor too long. Very nice!

-Erica-

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