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Teen Poetry #6

Lonely

Bruised
Junior Member

since 2003-07-12

Posts 13
Indiana, USA

0 posted 2003-07-13 01:10 AM

"Lonely"

You can't fight it
Holding these tears I wish
They could fall

I hold on
To everything I can
Especially to what I have

I even accept this pain
It's what I get
For being a friend to you

You left me here
It's my fault
I'm just missing you

One to far
One in paradise
One too busy

I hold myself tight
In the cold air of midnight
When I'm so lonely

I could cry for you
I could cut for you
I could say I miss you

These words I fear
I can't believe I'd say
Maybe I'm going insane

It's in the pain I hold
It's in these tears
It's in my spilt blood

I'm falling out of reach
I can hear my heart beat
I'm just lonely

~ Tenshi

"If it's too loud, you're too old!" - A Rock Artist

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-07-13 04:11 PM

hmmm..very well done. Very real emotions. I loved it. Especially the end.
~lex..

snoduck
Member

since 2002-11-15

Posts 99
Selah, WA

2 posted 2003-07-13 04:47 PM

wow, i must say very very emotional. This was my favorite part of the whole piece:
"I hold myself tight
In the cold air of midnight
When I'm so lonely"

i know how you feel. Ex's are never meant to be friends, in my oppinion. Very nice write!

-Erica-

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