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no1atall
New Member

since 2003-05-02

Posts 5

0 posted 2003-06-07 07:02 AM

~Forever~

Together we’ll lay,
softly called to sleep
we’ll watch our shadows skip away,
one by one, to the waiting.
So contented, wrapped in this blushing morning light,
the distant voices sing for us,
they fascinate.
Entwined, we dream,
and dreams create us.
Beautiful silence, stirred only by delicate morning sigh,
and gentle breath from sleepy lips
lures us deeper,
still they sing.
Whilst into me the calling creeps.
Finger-tips and fragile touch,
flow through,
so contented, we’ll fly together.
Such graceful poison to stain the scene,
unmoved, we’ll drift deeper,
faintly weeping
though your smile,
is to die for.
Entwined, we dream,
and dreams became us.

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Hey everyone, interpret this as you will but for me it's about knowing you are loved when you wake up next to the most beautiful person in the world =)

thanks a lot i'd appriciate any comments!
cHRiS

LegalSecret69
Member

since 2003-06-04

Posts 69
Virginia

1 posted 2003-06-07 08:10 AM

This was beautiful. Excellent job! Keep it up!... "Secret"

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

2 posted 2003-06-10 09:28 PM

Welcome to piptalk!

Your poem is beautiful... I can tell you're going to be a wonderful addition to our already wonderful group!

-Lioness

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

3 posted 2003-06-11 12:19 PM

good poem!

Kaydo
Junior Member

since 2003-06-02

Posts 17
Washington, USA

4 posted 2003-06-11 05:28 AM

Great poem. Made me feel pretty good after reading it. Look forward to reading more of your work.

Keep up the good work!

Work like you don't need the moeny, dance like no one is watching, and love like you've never been hurt.

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

5 posted 2003-06-11 10:43 AM

This was beautiful. It brought a smile to my face as I read it. Thanks for the read. I look forward to seeing more from you.
-Jenni

If you listen hard enough silence can mean more than words.

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