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fallen_star1715
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since 2003-06-25
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0 posted 2003-07-11 04:33 AM



Something that started of so so small,
Has grown so so tall,
all those lies,
i thought would bring us together,
Has done nothing,
Should i tell you,
Or should i not,
Why have i done this,
Why wont i stop,
If i tell you the truth you will be hurt,
Our friendship will drop,
You wont want to know me,
I will still love you,
Will you ever trust me again?¿

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Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 377
i can't stop hiding
1 posted 2003-07-11 07:34 PM


i really liked this post i have a lot of the same trouble with lies i would say tell the person or it will eat you inside but i know how hard that can be i wish you luck in this and keep posting
Alnilam
Member
since 2003-07-04
Posts 75

2 posted 2003-07-11 08:06 PM


lies, i hate them and yet how much they just dominate things...i can relate. and i love the poem, thanks for the good read. so short and simple.

~*Alnilam*~
"The worst tragedy for a poet is to be admired through being misunderstood."

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