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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Dreams bewilder shadows of the light hearted. Shadows of the fancy finger begin to draw, As illusions contort moves of visual strength. Tick….tock…..tick….tock Clocks vertically churn, belying the wings of grace. Wings carry flawlessly, solely falling on reigns of empowerment. Triumph twines and dines on a bird’s wishful beak. As circles begin to draw, our skin frantically jocks for new styles to thin. Yelps are heard, But heads are thou turned, sand sinks faster without burn. Sensations are lost, but pins of hair are decisively robust. Cactus stings, when dreams are mistaken for solitude. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
simply beautiful. I loved it..if I may ask how old are you? If you are a teen which posting in the teen area suggests..than your talent far surpasses your years. Amazing...I love your style. ~Lex..  |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Lexy- I truly appreciate your comments...a delight. I am 18 years old Tomer |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
Great poem! ~J.Lynn  "In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..." |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
more of a delight to read your poetry.. ~Lex  |
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