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Teen Poetry #6

Help Me

laurie
Member

since 2003-05-28

Posts 153
canada, ontario

0 posted 2003-06-05 01:10 PM

l'm screaming inside,
dying silently without light,
helpless.
You can't save me.
But you won't even try.
You pretend to understand.
Tell me l'm brave,
for telling you my secret.
And you turn around,
scorn echoing in your voice.
l'm annoying.
"Stop it. Stop complaining."
And my heart breaks,
just a little more...
the loss of a best friend my destruction.
You don't understand.
Do you even want to?
Help me, someone.
Give me the strength to fight,
until l can stand on my own,
and show you the true child inside.
Help me.

June 5 '03. Thursday
Laurie.

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

1 posted 2003-06-05 02:33 PM

Awww, Laurie, this is a heart-rending post of yours.....
Let's keep walking the path of life together, don't worry I'll try not to let you fall and if you do, I'll be right there to help you up again. You're a great person, so believe that!

Luv, Liz xxx

"Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~

SarBear
Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

2 posted 2003-06-05 02:34 PM

Its a great poem-it really makes me feel. Hang in there.

laurie
Member

since 2003-05-28

Posts 153
canada, ontario

3 posted 2003-06-06 02:11 AM

l'm always hanging. thats the problem. l'm always hanging, always alone and fighting.
until now, anyway...
yeah... so thanx.
laurie.

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