Teen Poetry #6 |
Special Man (r.i.p. poppy) |
lil cherry Member
since 2002-10-02
Posts 86Ont, Can. |
We walk hand in hand Even when I’m alone Because I hold him in my heart Wherever I may go When I look into the mirror I see his loving face When I’m crying in a corner I feel his warm embrace He told me to be myself To be proud of who I am And I’m proud to be his granddaughter Because he’s such a special man I’ll never let him go I won’t let his memory fade With all his love and wisdom I new life is what he’s made He may not be my parent But I hold him so very close Because his love was overwhelming A very healthy dose I’ll cherish him forever Wherever I may go Because with smile upon my heart And hand inside my hand I know no matter what I do I’ll never be alone I’ll be with this special man |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
aww..I'm sorry babe. But glad that you have the good memories and are able to look back on them with love and warmth for this obviouly specail man. I had the misfourtune to lose my grandpa this year too..unfortunatly we weren't on the best of terms when he died. I liked the poem very much. It struck a chord in me and I really felt the words. thanks for the read ~Live and Laugh~ Always strive for excellence never perfection. |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Indeed, a special man deserves a special poem. I'm sorry for your loss. Though you've lost your grandpa, you will never lose his love. -Leah |
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blueyedlioness Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289USA |
Aww... I haven't seen you here before, but I'll be looking for more of your writing... really nice job on that one. You were lucky to have such a special person in your life. -Lioness |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Im so sorry, and I do understand what you're going through, I lost my grandpa 3 years ago but I still miss him the same. Excellent way to express your loss, beautiful poem. WinterWren |
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lingering thoughts Member
since 2003-05-03
Posts 70Illinois, USA |
i think you did a really good job on this poem expressing how you feel about someone in your life... it makes me want to be closer to my grandfather,even though with my reasons i cant be , but anyways great job and keep writing *Cassandra |
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lil cherry Member
since 2002-10-02
Posts 86Ont, Can. |
thanks very much. i read it at his funeral and i put a copy in his coffin and some way it gives me comfort. i plan on sticking around and putting up more poetry. sorry i disapeared there. ~~*lil cherry*~~ |
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