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I Want Butterflies
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I Want Butterflies |
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SimpleDiscourse Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 79 |
Just a light little poem about teen romance. I want our eyes to slowly meet, I want a soft embarassed smile, I want to learn your name while my palms sweat, I want you to stutter and fumble over words, I want you to slowly get your bearings, I want your hand to gently brush mine, I want you to make me laugh in the rain, I want to tremble either from your touch or the cold, I want you to move your face closer to mine, I want a little hesitation before our lips meet, I want to take control of the situation, I want to kiss you until we have to stop for air, I want to be afraid of saying "I love you" even though I feel it, I want to fight for all the wrong and right reasons, I want you to break my heart. |
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lingering thoughts Member
since 2003-05-03
Posts 70Illinois, USA |
i like the repetiveness in the poem and the last stanza ...nice job  |
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blueyedlioness Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289USA |
I think I'm-a go cry again now... *sniff* -Lioness |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
I absolutely LOVED this poem! Thank you SO much for submitting this! It has made my day all the better... ~J.Lynn  "In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..." |
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