Teen Poetry #6 |
So Let it Be |
lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
Am I crazy to be feeling the way I do I have know you for what seems like a minute But indeed feels like a lifetime What do I do about these butterflies inside how i feel is hard to hide iam wondering if you understand? Or if you feel like I do? Why did you have to come in my life And then leave, just like that Am I crazy to want to be with you To want to be where you are So you tell me you like me, you dont want to leave Then why didnt you stay Now im without you to this day So now its miles not minutes So now its bye not hi So tell me if im crazy to want to scream So someone pinch me and tell me to wake from this dream I cant stop how i feel I cant pretend you didnt matter So call me crazy for feeling I want this to be a fairy tale Where I see you again But I know and you know, thats all just pretend So should I move on to the next Get hurt once and again So months have gone by,life still the same So are you thinking of me still or do i not exist Iam sick of the getting hurt part that comes with each love So I do all that i can to see you once more but you say dont go for me like now what we felt hides behind a closed door Start from the beging, or start from the end? how bout you forget how you feel and just be my friend prentend i dont matter to you prentend you dont care So call me crazy if i dont want to |
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blueyedlioness Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289USA |
Guys can be such morons... *sigh* Know how ya feel, girl. Nice job on the poem... however, it was a bit inconsistent. You might try to format it so it's a bit easier to follow. And fix the spelling mistakes... Keep on writing! -Lioness |
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lingering thoughts Member
since 2003-05-03
Posts 70Illinois, USA |
i can relate to your poem ... its hard to try to be friends with someone when you have had a rough past already iam in that situation right now and its so hard when you see them with other people ...wishing it was you that took there place .. but other than that it needs a little fixing in spelling but it was good ! *Cassandra |
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