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Meeting you |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
So hey I've just met you don't really know you but I think I like you don't know you think I'm a fallin for you now what am I supposed to do fallin for someone I've never met you ain't real part of this fake world of make belive on the internet I know you're probably lying to me about at least something my nutso friend rocks away listening to hell scream loud and I sit here swingin' my legs listening to the click of keys going nuts in my own hell don't know what kind of lies you tell wishing you weren't tellin' any but not knowin' can't trust you with my name know somethin just ain't right with this arrangement i want to tell you more but I'm not supposed to why does it work this way It seems like I could trust you But I really don't know and I'm going crazy in this hell I don't know if today is a good day, or if yesterday was, or if tomorrow will be, but I'd like to think so. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Figuring things out where the internet is concerned is hard work.....n sometimes it's right n sometimes it isn't. Usually, if you are cautious enough and follow your gut instinct (what you see/feel rather than what you want to see/feel) you will find the right answers. I wish you the best of luck and I completely emphasise because I have grown close to an online friend, not without a lot of soul searching. So I understand somewhat what you are going through. pigletdoglet@hotmail.com is my msn thing if you want to talk about it at all. Otherwise, great poem, nice expressed.....I like this bit especially: "and I sit here swingin' my legs listening to the click of keys going nuts in my own hell don't know what kind of lies you tell wishing you weren't tellin' any but not knowin'" It's exactly that. Thanks for sharing this one with us and again I hope things work out for you and that you don't get hurt in the process. Luv, Liz xxx "Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~ |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
i liked this alot. it was very intense. keep writing. i am in trouble but no one knows it if you can figure out my messages thenhelp me. |
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