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Teen Poetry #6

The Key to Before...

HeroicVillan
Junior Member

since 2002-11-09

Posts 34
Lost.....

0 posted 2003-05-22 10:01 PM

Remember that time?
Of course u do.
I made up that rhyme,
you didnt know was true.

You've always been here
Right here next to me.
Whispering in my ear,
helping me to see.

And now u just left,
went away without me.
You commited a theft,
you stole my only key.

The key to my heart,
to a friendship true.
But now we'll be apart,
and ill find someone new.

Remember that rhyme?
But you dont anymore.
You forgot that time.
You dont care about before.....

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

1 posted 2003-05-22 10:06 PM

Woah... we posted at like, almost the same time.

I LOVE your poetry. I am seriously threading you to my library. Absolutely awesome...

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

2 posted 2003-05-22 10:57 PM

this is really good i like it.

Jenni

Every oak tree started out as a couple of nuts who stood their
ground. --Anonymous

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

3 posted 2003-05-23 05:16 PM

Very good, cool how the first and last verses link up. Reads well, I think....cause I enjoyed it

Luv, Liz xx

"Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~

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