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Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

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0 posted 2002-10-10 04:50 PM

Write the words
  of my depression
and speak them
a
  l
   o
    u
     d
at my funeral.

Riley

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since 2002-07-18

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in the pouring rain

1 posted 2002-10-10 08:41 PM

loved it, short sweet and yet powerful

Ri

~* Love humiliates you, hatered cradles you-White Olender *~

PoetryIsLife

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2 posted 2002-10-10 11:40 PM

Rhonda? Fabulous. Smashing, dear.

Sincerely,
Ti

"My imaginary friend thinks you have serious mental problems."

(2002 Copyright)

Skyfire

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3 posted 2002-10-10 11:44 PM

Riley - Thanks muchly :-)
Ti - Danka, mon ami, danka. Love the sig btw

A toque IS a hat! And I have one!

PoetryIsLife

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4 posted 2002-10-11 12:09 PM

I just ordered the shirt from BMG a week or so ago. Should arive any day.

~Ti

"My imaginary friend thinks you have serious mental problems."

(2002 Copyright)

quietlydying

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since 2001-06-10

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5 posted 2002-10-11 01:08 AM

what is bmg?

oh, and you're just jealous because the voices are talking to me.

/jen/

i just haven't been the same since that house fell on my sister.

[the closest thing i've found to heaven is sitting here talking to you.bif naked]

Marshalzu

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6 posted 2002-10-11 08:11 AM

I like this, short and simple but very effective, thanks for sharing it with us

Andrew

Skyfire

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7 posted 2002-10-11 07:36 PM

It was a blurb that I wrote on my door at three in the morning one night. I'm actaully quite impressed with how it turned out, but I'm still looking for that one huge inspiration that I get once a month. Thanks for the reply Zu

Jen, BMG is like Columbia House. Except Columbia House is better. Way better.

Local Parasite

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8 posted 2002-10-12 11:15 AM

This is cool. I don't want a funeral, though.

Speak your own words of depression, or you'll never be able to enjoy people's reactions.

PoetryIsLife

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9 posted 2002-10-13 09:20 PM

Better? Ha. Not possible. Well, actually, it is possible. I simply find it hard to believe. BMG doesn't have any edited cd's, or anything recently new (that is, anything recent that is selling.) LoL. I'm using BMG< CDNOW, and I'm thinking of joining Columbia to feed my CD need.

LP.... that was truly funny.

Sincerely,
Titus

PoetryIsLife

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10 posted 2002-10-13 09:21 PM

Rhonda, I was curious, why would you have them be spoken aloud? So that the very things which seemingly took the life from your viens would be forced into the light?

This is a fantastic poem, by the way, one of your best.

Sincerely,
Titus

Skyfire

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11 posted 2002-10-13 09:51 PM

Ti... I don't know, actually. I wrote that at like three in the morning on my door lol. Your explination sounds good to me though

Mind if I borrow it?

Dopey Dope

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12 posted 2002-10-13 10:17 PM

Pretty sad here. I liked it though. Simple, and powerful.

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