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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
As the tears Simply keep coming All my thoughts are Jumbled into one And I now can see That what once was Is still fresh in My mind. Your love will be carved Into my heart Where it will stay for all eternity Like a stain that won't fade Like a cut that won't heal The pain is so real, so intense It hurts to even breathe I'm sorry for what I've done But I know thats not enough. If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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xxshadowxx Junior Member
since 2003-05-17
Posts 43Texas |
That was really gooodd. ~Carrie~ "Hard days made me, hard nights shaped me" |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
uummm yeah that could have been written by me. It describes something that happened to me exactly. Thanks for posting. Jenni There are three kinds of people in this world, those who can count, and those who can't. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Then prove it... Well done, SG. Enjoyed. --Marie "You can be idealistic for all of ten seconds before you die." (Imitation of Life) |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
I like this a lot Staci...I can relate. GREAT write. Love you! ~J.Lynn  "In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..." |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
Wow...I remember reading this one in your book...but I could read it a hundred times over again. I really liked this one, Stac! Nice job. As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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