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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-05-20 08:58 PM

Keep it all
Locked up inside
No place to run
No place to hide

Tell me this
What do you see
through your eyes
when you look at me?

Do you see a tear?
Or do you see a stone?
Everyone has left me,
So completely alone...

Washed away so cleanly
by the newly fallen rain
I guess the dam couldn't hold
against all this pain....

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

xxshadowxx
Junior Member

since 2003-05-17

Posts 43
Texas

1 posted 2003-05-20 09:07 PM

Another great poem... great work
~*Carrie*~

"Hard days made me, hard nights shaped me"

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

2 posted 2003-05-20 09:32 PM

I just *love* the way you write. *smile*

-Lioness

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2003-05-20 10:05 PM

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

4 posted 2003-05-20 11:24 PM

ooh...I like.(I know this isn't the greatest, most in depth reply, but I'm REALLY tired and it's all I can manage. LoL)
Jenni

There are three kinds of people in this world, those who can count, and those who can't.

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

5 posted 2003-05-21 03:03 PM

"I guess the dam couldn't hold against all the pain"
I like. I like very very much

Liz xx

"Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

6 posted 2003-05-22 06:32 AM

Thanks everyone. Your replies are appreciated.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

7 posted 2003-05-24 04:57 PM

Man Staci, your poems never cease to amaze me. You have the most beautiful way of putting words together. I really like this one. This is so beautiful. Nice job.

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

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