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xxshadowxx Junior Member
since 2003-05-17
Posts 43Texas |
No one seems to care this pain I can not bare cold stares hatefull glares I can see you think I'm a freak my piercings hair and clothes does it make you feel weak my music is to loud I dont fit in with the crowd I chose not to be you some one hatefull,judgemental, with out a clue I have my own thougts and dreams to you they may be stupid it seems I will not let you make me feel like I dont belong you are the ones that are wrong! |
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Albino_Jenn Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 105Ontario, Canada |
Bonne poésie, il a beaucoup de passion behing le, et il montre vraiment le sentiment! Le bon travail! Jenn **It's better to be hated for who you are, than loved for who you are not** |
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xxshadowxx Junior Member
since 2003-05-17
Posts 43Texas |
Now if i could only understand that... hmmm.. ~*Carrie*~ "Hard days made me, hard nights shaped me" |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
shadow, I like this. A lot of people see me as "different" too. I think they're the different ones! LoL. Good write. I enjoyed the sentiment. I'm not sure if that was stated correctly, but oh well. I'll be different.(haha) Jenni There are three kinds of people in this world, those who can count, and those who can't. |
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Albino_Jenn Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 105Ontario, Canada |
Here let me help you desifer it: Good poem, it has much passion behind it, and it really shows the feeling! Good work! Jenn **It's better to be hated for who you are, than loved for who you are not** |
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xxshadowxx Junior Member
since 2003-05-17
Posts 43Texas |
Ahhh... i knew that... lol. well thank you im glad you liked it carrie "Hard days made me, hard nights shaped me" |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Everyone is different, so be you and be proud of it, as this poem suggests you already do  Great poem, although maybe you should work on some structure or meter or something. However I don't know too much about this stuff, so don't take my word for it!! Thanks for sharing Luv, Liz xxx "Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~ |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
You go girl! I'll give you the same advice my friend Tyler gave me: Don't let it change who you are as a person. Keep it up!  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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blackandwhitehorizon Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183an akward state of mind |
nice poem "Being grown up isn't half as fun as growing up; these are the best days of our lives" |
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