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FlyingCloud
Member

since 2003-04-28

Posts 151
A little place inside my head

0 posted 2003-05-20 04:01 PM

The clouds are dark and gloomy,
I see in your black eyes,
The wind is fierce and chilly,
We part and say goodbyes.

But goodbyes are not forever,
My dearest, closest friend,
Although it may be never,
Would we see each other again.

Perhaps in the distant future,
You, me, older, grown up, adult,
This separation will make us better,
And a closer kinship, is the result.

"Always remember to forget
The friends that proved untrue.
But never forget to remember
Those who have stuck by you."

=====
This is dedicated to my friend, who is moving away over the summer. We have had many good times together, and through thick and thin, we stuck together.

Always remember to forget
The friends that proved untrue.
But never forget to remember
Those who have stuck by you.
-Anon

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

1 posted 2003-05-20 04:18 PM

this is really nice...

... great job

"Being grown up isn't half as fun as growing up; these are the best days of our lives"

xxshadowxx
Junior Member

since 2003-05-17

Posts 43
Texas

2 posted 2003-05-20 06:39 PM

I loved your poem.. grreaatt job!

"Hard days made me, hard nights shaped me"

lilibeelee
Member

since 2001-07-12

Posts 143

3 posted 2003-05-20 08:30 PM

very well written,.

AlostHeart
Member

since 2003-05-01

Posts 78
Wisconsin, U.S.

4 posted 2003-05-20 10:23 PM

Total tear jerker!

i'm in the same position with one of my two best friends.

great write..
~Tori Louise~

Dont ever love a guy that will never love you back, no matter how hard you try.

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

5 posted 2003-05-21 10:10 AM

Awww...this was so sweet! I love it..this is going into my library! ~Jess

"What I am is good enough if I would only be it openly."

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2003-05-22 12:53 PM

Indeed, friends are special...
wonderful display of love for someone who you obviously cherish.
Enjoyed ~

--Marie

"You can be idealistic for all of ten seconds before you die." (Imitation of Life)

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

7 posted 2003-05-22 08:10 PM

This is so sweet! I agree with you--even if two people never see each other again sometimes their connection is unbroken. Very good work and I hope your friend liked it too. Best of luck to you both!

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

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