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SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

0 posted 2003-05-19 10:32 PM

Breathing in fresh confusion
No idea what's going on around her
Not even able to fathom the hopelessness
In which her heart pounds faster
The walls start to close in around her
She can't escape the madness
It's as if she's living someone elses dream
But she cannot awake from this slumber
For she is already lost
Never again finding her way out
For eternity she's trapped
With a dark cloud around every corner
Awaiting her presence
Ready to leap at the chance to make her life even darker
Pleading to ruin her miserable being
But when finally encountering her
Slowly backs away
Only to find that she's already been destroyed
A self-affliction burns her soul
Blood flowing freely from each wrist
The very life draining out of her
And no longer will she feel constant pain
No longer will she always be brought down by darkness
And no longer will she have a dark cloud
Awaiting her presence

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

1 posted 2003-05-19 10:35 PM

Awww... no one is lost forever, and the more lost you are, the more of a treasure you'll be when you find yourself and realize how strong you really are. Someone will certinly find you, weather it's you or another who learns to love ya, it'll happen. It happened to me, and if it works for me, then anyone can do it!

Great poem, by the way!

Forever I will stand
always here with you.
Now stay and hold my hand
and together we'll go somewhere new.
~Rich~

[This message has been edited by HopelessRomanticGuy (05-19-2003 10:35 PM).]

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

2 posted 2003-05-20 06:28 AM

very good megan.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

3 posted 2003-05-20 09:38 AM

I read this one already, great job! I love it..hehe!

Yep, I already have it in my notebook..! ~Jess

"What I am is good enough if I would only be it openly."

AlostHeart
Member

since 2003-05-01

Posts 78
Wisconsin, U.S.

4 posted 2003-05-20 12:22 PM

Good! ~tori louise~

Dont ever love a guy that will never love you back, no matter how hard you try.

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

5 posted 2003-05-20 02:16 PM

Great imagery... It was dark and a little frightening, but you brought out the images well. Well done.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

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